As the night grew darker,
Rain fell harder.
As the rain started drenching,
The thirst of barren land started quenching.
My life seems to grow in pain,
Everything seems to be in vain.
The thunder frightens me,
And nobody cares for thee.
Raindrops get drizzled,
And the lightning is dazzled.
When looking through the window,
It reminds me of the fear that I have to swallow.
Hope this rain,
Let the pain drain.
And ends with a beautiful sunrise,
Making me wise.
BY- APARNA SHARMA
The thunder frightens me,
And nobody cares for thee.
I care you. ❤️
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Thanks a lot buddy 🌻🌻
For reading, appreciating and always reminding me that you are my permanent support 😂😍🤩
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Sweet dreams to you.😇
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Sweet dreams buddy 😴🤩
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Beautifully written Aparna
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Thanks a lot for reading and appreciating 🤩🤩
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My pleasure Aparna
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Beautiful poem dear Aparna. ❤️
I love the rhyming and how it flows. Good work dear 👏👏
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Thanks a lot dear🌼🌼
I am glad you liked it🤩🤩
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Beautifully written, Aparna. Nature can be so inspiring. Loved the rhythm of your loved
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*of your lines
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That’s so sweet of you Shweta 😅😀
I am glad that you loved it 🤩
Indeed nature can be inspiring like you 🤩🌼🌼
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You are most welcome ❤🤗😊
Ohh, that’s so kind of you
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That’s a lovely poem Aparna, rain poem n fear? may be in dark night when it’s harder. Here you go sweetest. Loves 😇❣
Why fear
My dear
Enjoy the rain
Forget your pain.
Dark nights
Thunderstorms
Loneliness are
Glimpse of light.
Convert them
Into sweet dreams
Beautiful flowers 💐
Lovely feelings 🌹
Coz we sh/be wise
As no one care.
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Awwww..! A million thanks to you dear Suma😍 I’m so glad you loved it. You can’t imagine the bright smile after reading your lovely comment. You are a sweetheart..! Your thoughts for poem were amazing 💯💯Thanks for your sweet and kind words my dear friend🌼
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Oh! Always my sweet pleasure dear one. Keep smiling n shine brighter Always 😇❤👍
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You too keep smiling ☺️
Have a great day ahead ❤️🤗
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Thanks dear 🤗😍
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Love the poetry and creative writing you have. That gif at the beginning…WOW!!!
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Thanks a lot for reading 💐💐
I am glad you loved it and were able to connect with it. 😃😊
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Thanks a lot for paying a visit on my blog
I will surely check out your blog 😃😃
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Aparna, I’m a big fan of this poem and the emotions you have explored. I love that lift at the end 🙂
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Thanks a bunch my dear friend ☺️
I am grateful for your kind words and support 🤗🌻❤️
I am also huge fan of your writing skills 🙂
Keep blogging 😅
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Oh you are more than welcome 😊 I am also a big fan of what you weave together 💜
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That’s my honour dear 🤗🌻
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Wowww..! Such a beautiful and wonderful poem dear Aparna..! Each and every lines are so amazing..! Happy to see your post..! Have a beautiful day..!😊😊✨
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Thanks a lot dear for reading 😊
I am also happy to see your lovely comment ☺️🥰
I am glad you liked it 🌞🌻🌻
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Awww!! How sweet and lovely to are!! You’re very welcome dear..! It’s absolutely my pleasure..!🤗🤗🌺✨😊💖
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Ahh,,,,, this is so beautiful. And reading this while enjoying rain is something so pleasant. Loved the flow. Amazing. Nature heals and it will definitely drain our pain making us wise …….
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Thanks a lot my dear Aanchal 🤗🌻
Indeed the nature is best healer 💛
That to Rain 🌧️🌧️
It gives different positive vibe 💙💙
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Lovely poem ending on a positive note❤️
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Thank you so much Ma’am for reading and appreciating 🤗
I think ending should always be positive 😅
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True!
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Very well written. The ending about wisdom is so true in life.
Brilliant
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Thanks a lot Sir
I am glad you liked it 😃🤩
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👍🏻👍🏻🙂
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Wow, what a fantastic rhyming. Thanks for sharing the poem with us!
Haha, rains are not that bad are they?
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Thanks a bunch for reading and sharing your thoughts 🤗
No Rains are not that bad 😂
But I love the freshness of environment after rain not during the rain 🌧️😅
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Yes, rain purifies the enviornment.
The freshness of environment after rain is soothing! And the essence of wet soil. omg I want some rain now haha
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Ha ha 😂
Hope it rains in your area 🤠
And you enjoy the positivity it brings 😅🌧️
Have a great day ahead 😊
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😉❤
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Thanks for reading 🤩
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❤😘🙏
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